Analysis of Picked Benefactors



Oh...
The agony and pain that comes,
To the ones who believe...
Their influence to achieve over others,
Has begun...
A pendulum swing.
Heading towards those charading bravery,
Seen beginning to run.
As far as they can and away from threats.
Threats of their own making.

Can what,
Is intended to break the faith and hope...
Of humanity.
By the unwinding of once conscious minds.
Absent of sense to have had.
Yet...
Unaware of this to miss.
However,
Made convinced...
To have an immortal permanence.

Can a seduction so overwhelming,
Be that powerful to leave behind...
Even a narcissistic ego.
Sickened and blinded...
By their own fictionalized existence?

The proof and evidence to a question like this,
Is pointless.
Especially when the answer,
Has flashing neon signs on it.
And skipping around everywhere...
Confessing to fraud and crimes committed.

An habitual addiction,
Fed and meant exclusively to feed...
Deception and hypocrisy.
That will leave,
A selection of picked numbed nuts...
Left to believe themselves benefactors?

And...
What will that benefit to leave,
To those benefactors be?
The warm caress of a dollar bill?
Or the warm soft touches,
Of chrome encrusted copper made things.
Glistening.
Until the rust starts to fade,
Pretensions taught to imitate a fakeness.

'Who is benefitting from what done to do?
As something of value to leave to who?
To then perceive the worth is priceless.'


Scheme ABCDEFGEXF XXGXXXHIXJ FXAXJ HKIXXX EXGCXD XCGXXXFXB LLK
Poetic Form
Metre 1 01000111 101101 11001011010 101 01001 100111100 101011 1111100111 111110 11 1010110101 10100 1001011101 1011111 1 011111 10 101 111010100 100101010 111001101 10001010 10010 111100010 010100101011 110 0101010 11010111 0100110 0101101010 10100010 101010011 01000100 111 00101111 110101100 0 11110011 111001 010110101 101110 110101011 100 0101111 010111001 11100011111 1101101111 110101110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,408
Words 285
Sentences 37
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 10, 10, 5, 6, 6, 9, 3
Lines Amount 49
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 157
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted by lpahtillah on April 23, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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