Analysis of Brink Of Fine



I can only wish
To be let out of this horrid cage
I can only wish
To be classified as okay

I can only wish
To see my lovely again
I can only wish
I’ll be alive when the day ends

I can only wish
The med won’t kill my mind
Oh dear reader
I can only wish
To be on the brink of fine


Scheme AxAx AxAx AxxAx
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 111111101 11101 111011 11101 1111001 11101 11011011 11101 011111 1110 11101 1110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 288
Words 71
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 71
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

I'm on a new AdHd medication. I'm struggling with the fact it makes me angry.

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Submitted by Sproutheadedhurt on April 25, 2022

Modified by Sproutheadedhurt on May 12, 2022

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