Analysis of Never Rebound - its too easy for us girls part 2

Donna F Newton 1972 (Santa Rosa Ca)



Now your alone
with an erection
to hide
you must stay in
your seat
until it subsides

Another round of drinks
while you kill the time
five minutes later
a female voice is
saying hi

With elated surprise
you look up to see
a tall beautiful blonde
asking you what you
drink

Clearing your throat
you invite her to sit
she accepts your offer
and takes a sip

In deep conversation
and most things
in common
you think to yourself
'I must of died
and gone to heaven'

Late into the night
rather early into the
morning
you can now
stand up
because the establishment
is closing

Helping the blonde
into her coat
you whisper in her ear
Won't you join me at home'

Once again
she accepts your offer
and the gentleman
you are you
lean in to kiss her

Holding her hand
all the way home
your erect passion
can be stifled no
more

The door flies open
in your passionate embrace
hot and heavy kissing
smears her lipstick
all over her face

You move to her neck
and lower your body
onto hers
in the next sixty seconds
your night will take
a horrible turn

As the only erection
now in the room
is the erection
on your bed
staring back
at you


Scheme xabxxx xxcxx xdefx gxCx axaxba xxhxxxh egxi xCafc xiaxx ajhxj xdxxxx axaxxf
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 11010 11 1110 11 01101 010111 11101 11010 0111 101 101001 11111 011001 10111 1 1011 101011 101110 0101 01010 011 010 11101 1111 01110 10101 1010010 10 111 11 0100100 110 1001 0101 110001 111111 101 101110 00100 111 10110 1001 1011 10110 11101 1 01110 0110001 101010 101 11001 11101 010110 100 0011010 1111 01001 1010010 1001 10010 111 101 11
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 1,125
Words 228
Sentences 1
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 5, 4, 6, 7, 4, 5, 5, 5, 6, 6
Lines Amount 64
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 75
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

This poem is the second part to Its too easy for girls. It the males side of things.

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Written on May 16, 2016

Submitted by Dnewton9215 on May 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:09 min read
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Donna F Newton

It all started when i entered a poetry contest for my local news paper. I wrote my first poem which was chosen a winner and published. Ive been writing since. more…

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