Analysis of Gone Is The Existence

Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)



Picking to choose,
Others to believe...
They are easy to use.
And made to be fools.
Will one day come to see,
Belittling to criticize...
The only people,
Who have shown them respect.
Yet not from 'them' to get.
Had been the very ones,
Who had always known...
Where people like that come from.
And where they are going,
To be left alone.
When people like that awaken to realize,
A taking for granted of others to do...
Is not a wise decision to choose to make.
As the sun rises to dawn on their stupidity!
Since...
It makes no sense,
That anyone should go out of their way...
To convince and prove,
Who the real fools are to be.
As if they had been on a mission,
To attract to themselves the attention!

Life to live,
With obtaining a multitude of experiences.
Eventually exposes,
The ones who suffer...
From this mental condition.
To end the tolerating to keep patience for it.
Gone to disappear is the existence!


Scheme XXXXABXXXXCXXCBXXAXXXXADD XEEXDXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 10101 111011 01111 111111 0100110 01010 111101 111111 110101 1111 1101111 011110 11101 11011010110 01011011011 11010101111 1011011110100 1 1111 110111111 10101 1011111 111111010 1011010010 111 1010010101000 01000010 01110 1110010 110100111011 110110010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 913
Words 200
Sentences 21
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 25, 7
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 349
Words per stanza (avg) 84
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Written on June 05, 2022

Submitted by lpahtillah on June 05, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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