Analysis of Take My Hand
Take My Hand
Mommy, I can’t make it alone, please help me along the way,
My dear child I will always be with you or never far away.
My little legs can’t go too fast; to me you are so grand,
I’ll wait for you along the way, my child, take my hand.
Mom can you help me, I have much homework to do,
My daughter I will help, you must learn to do it too.
These numbers are so very hard for me to understand,
I will show you how to work them, remember, take my hand.
Mother, he asked me to marry, we already chose a date,
I am so happy for you my child, your father and I can’t wait.
Come, help me find a dress and the flowers for the stand,
I will go along with you daughter, as always, take my hand.
We are going to have a girl, I hope she looks like you mom,
If she is healthy and you are happy, then your house will be calm.
I may need your help to care for her, but only if you can,
I will help you when you need it, little fingers take my hand.
The tears for you my mother, down my face so freely fall,
I’m not long for earth my daughter, I hear my Father’s call.
I cherish the days we had together and your life on this land,
I see my mother in heaven, she is calling, Take my Hand.
Bettie Pfeiffer
Scheme | ABBAA CCAA DDAA EEXA FFAAX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111 101111011110101 111111111110101 11011111111111 1111010111111 11111111111 1101111111111 1101110111101 11111111010111 101111101010101 1111011111100111 1111010010101 11101111011111 111011011111111 1111001110111111 111111110110111 111111111010111 01111101111101 11111110111101 1100111010011111 111100101110111 110 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 1,215 |
Words | 277 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 4, 4, 4, 5 |
Lines Amount | 22 |
Letters per line (avg) | 41 |
Words per line (avg) | 12 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 180 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 51 |
About this poem
Written for my mother, Dortha Motter, whom we lost last April 19 2021. She was 94 and suffered from AFib and dimentia.
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Written on April 19, 2021
Submitted by nomadsangel on May 15, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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