Analysis of Feeling It Felt To say
Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)
To be where we are,
Experiencing to know...
The reality of it.
We all are here not to stay but visit.
And creations in different images.
Reflecting our Creator.
Taught to teach and learn to call God.
The Almighty Creator.
To be where we are.
And who we are.
Depicted with our ethnic differences.
Not here on Earth to stay but visit.
This Creator,
Chooses without it scheduled.
Or scheduled time given for it to prove.
When that time for all us comes.
Who it is,
God decides to move on.
Without warning, hints or clues.
Leaving us with nothing to do but pray.
No one living in this existence,
Can refuse to have what God does their way!
So those who pray,
And stay that way faithfully devoted.
Knowing how to feel love felt,
For ourselves and others shown.
We grow to learn to do this.
We grow to learn,
This 'visit' given is a temporary experience.
As most age to value life lived,
Is a blessing.
That comes to go.
And speeds away too fast.
To hesitate, procrastinate or await to say...
I LOVE YOU MORE THAN WORDS CAN SAY!
'You what?
Love me?
What's gotten into you?'
Words can not express,
How my love felt for you is.
'Uh...
I know you don't owe me any money.
Or do you?
I don't remember.'
It's all about love.
And my wanting to let you know.
With a happiness so real to feel,
To let you hear it and be shown.
'Okay. Okay.
I'll remind you of this love.
When all you've got to give me is attitude.'
Know this...
It will be given to be delivered with love!
'LOL...STOP IT!
You are up to something.'
Love to feel felt,
Should never ever...
Invite your suspicions to accept as is!
Just say it.
That's all it takes for me to believe you do.
Scheme | Abcdxexe Aafdexxxfxxghg gxijkxhxlbxgg dmn xf xmne obxj gox ko cl iefcn |
---|---|
Poetic Form | Tetractys (33%) Etheree (23%) |
Metre | 11111 0100011 01011 1111111110 00100100100 01010010 11101111 0010010 11111 0111 010110101000 111111110 1010 1001110 1101101111 1111111 111 11111 0110111 1011101111 111001010 1011111111 1111 0111100010 1011111 10010101 1111111 1111 11010101000100 11111011 1010 1111 010111 11001010111 11111111 11 11 110011 11101 1111111 1 1111111010 111 11010 11011 01101111 101001111 11111011 11 1011111 1111111110 11 111101101011 11 111110 1111 11010 01101010111 111 11111110111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,647 |
Words | 384 |
Sentences | 51 |
Stanzas | 11 |
Stanza Lengths | 8, 14, 13, 3, 2, 4, 4, 3, 2, 2, 5 |
Lines Amount | 60 |
Letters per line (avg) | 21 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 112 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 29 |
Font size:
Written on June 08, 2022
Submitted by lpahtillah on June 08, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
- 1:57 min read
- 4 Views
Citation
Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:
Style:MLAChicagoAPA
"Feeling It Felt To say" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 23 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/129558/feeling-it-felt-to-say>.
Discuss this Lawrence S. Pertillar poem analysis with the community:
Report Comment
We're doing our best to make sure our content is useful, accurate and safe.
If by any chance you spot an inappropriate comment while navigating through our website please use this form to let us know, and we'll take care of it shortly.
Attachment
You need to be logged in to favorite.
Log In