Analysis of This...Mysteriousness!

Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)



As the misery index climbs up a notch,
More are feeling the affects effectively...
The pressure of being stressed.
Whether they are faithfully religious or not.

Some say the ways of God are mysterious.
So mysterious even those who God picks,
To expose and deliver this...mysteriousness!
Are not aware of how they are being used.
Yet more are feeling,
Effectively the affects to feel...
The reality and truth,
Of their miseries revealed.
And from where they came,
To have monopolized their lives.

And...
With each day,
That comes to pass...
Denial to accept as a way to live,
More are beginning to realize...
Is their own appetite to crave deception.
A deception they permit and it to last.
And this...deception,
Has nothing to do...
With the mysteriousness of truth.
That God introduces with it wished,
Those awakening to smell the coffee...
Begin to notice it more than what coffee is!


Scheme XAXX BXBXXXCXXX XXXXXDXDXCXAX
Poetic Form
Metre 10100101101 11100010100 0101101 101110001011 11011110100 10100101111 10100101 11011111101 11110 010000111 01001 1110001 01111 1101011 0 111 1111 01010110111 11010110 1111011010 00101010111 01 11011 10111 11010111 1010011010 011101111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 888
Words 180
Sentences 20
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 10, 13
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 230
Words per stanza (avg) 50
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Written on June 28, 2022

Submitted by lpahtillah on June 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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