Analysis of Desert Blooms



Shall I take a handful of stardust
Sprinkle them on the Morning Star?
Float like the moon, pale, anxiety-stricken
Face of the desert bloom.

Every thorny thought of His beloved’s
Pricking fresh wounds;
Torn tender petals, falling one-by-one,
From this fair Rose of Sharon.

The sandstorms and scorching summer’s sun
Should come,
Burn restless egos
Tan shrubby pretentions.

Even your eyes throbbed,
Streams of thick agony in Gethsemane,
Bloody tears
Melting rough edges.
Shreds of poignant memories
Shall not cling
To untidy cobwebs
Holding murky trees.

The devastated road we journeyed
Through the Valley of Baca,
Salty sighs, shattered tear drops
Shall find an answer.
Join the springs in the desert
Become dashing desert blooms.


Scheme AXBX CCBB BXCC ABCCCXCC XXCXXC
Poetic Form
Metre 1110111 10110101 11011010010 110101 100101111 111 1101010111 1111110 01010101 11 11010 1101 10111 11110001 101 10110 1110100 111 10101 10101 01001110 1010110 1011011 11110 1010010 0110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 753
Words 137
Sentences 8
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 8, 6
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 118
Words per stanza (avg) 23

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Spiritual experience

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Submitted by prathibha_e on July 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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