Analysis of Scenic Route



We work hard to survive,
but are we even living?
our jobs fill us with pride,
but they are hardly fulfilling.

When will we bet on our self,
in this game called life?
Use our time for true greatness,
Instead of squandering time

I once wanted a rocky road,
filled with a challenging career,
but all it did was left me cold,
and filled me with fear

Perhaps if I majored in english,
I wouldn't be in this scene,
feeling pain in my liver,
and splints in my spleen

I will regain my honor,
if time will allow,
taking the scenic route forever,
for all my endeavors.


Scheme XAXA XXXX XBXB XCDC DXDX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Etheree  (30%)
Metre 111101 1111010 1011111 11110010 11111101 01111 11011110 0111001 11100101 11010001 11111111 01111 011110010 1101011 1010110 01011 1101110 11101 100101010 111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 561
Words 127
Sentences 4
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

This poem about life's choices. Written on a ordinary day in April, 2022, it exemplifies the millennial struggle to find meaning in work, and a zest for living.

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Written on April 23, 2022

Submitted by on August 26, 2022

Modified by on August 26, 2022

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