Analysis of L'inconfort d'une vie brisée
My papa always saying "I'm a good, girl."
Papa was always happy and he keeps on inviting me to a room, he said "he wanted to play with me"
But papa was angry with me and said "I'm a bad girl now."
Because I didn't follow what he said.
Papa was so scary,
He started on grabbing me into a dark room.
Papa started destroying my body, and feeling me.
My stomach was on a grip.
Poor little me.
I don't feel good
My collapse body couldn't handle it, my stomach feels like as if it's going to rip up.
A loud voice coming inside it.
Papa keeps on eaiting my collapse body.
My body started heated up as if there's something coming inside.
He's now drinking my soup.
Papa keeps on playing with me, everyday.
Poor little girl no one even help her.
| Scheme | X A XX AX A X A X X X A X X X X |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1101101011 10111001110101101111101111 110110110110111 0111010111 101110 110110101011 10100101100101 1101101 1101 1111 10110101011101111110111 01110011 1011110110 11010101111101001 111011 10111011101 1101111010 |
| Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
| Characters | 751 |
| Words | 173 |
| Sentences | 14 |
| Stanzas | 15 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
| Lines Amount | 17 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 33 |
| Words per line (avg) | 8 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 37 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 10 |
About this poem
DISCLAIMER: 「a trigger warning for those people who want to read this story.」 And this story is about of a child, who got raped from his own father.
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Written on August 15, 2022
Submitted by Yoru on August 15, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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