Analysis of Dismissing Pretensions

Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)



Contradictions kept?
Checked.
Hypocrisies kept?
Checked.
Pretensions kept to live them?

'Hold on.
Let's not get carried away.
One step at a time to examine.
Is better to take.
To ensure some success is made.'

First let's come to agree to understand,
Dismissing kept to keep false pretensions.
Is a difficult undertaking for many to face.
When fictioned fairytales to have lived them,
And marketed to emulate?
Most upset will begin to protest,
Their way of life affording them no escape...
Has only truth left.
To debate it for what truth is.

OH, YES!
And...
Not only that.
Hearing to see the facts exposed.
Can permanently damage,
The minds of those who have opposed...
Truth to refuse it to deny,
All of their lives it has existed kept hidden.
In fear it has been revealed to threaten...
Their impressions to make,
They need on a daily basis...
To charade and disguise their masquerading.

Oh, yes yes yes.
And not only that.
Truth to accept as reality to live it.
Without deceiving oneself?
Think about what this horror will do,
For the many who will then begin...
To see themselves too!

'And...
What is this called again?'

Some call it TRUTH.
Although others prefer to call it,
The enemy of deluded people!
The ones wanting to destroy it.
And their way of life as well.

'What sense does that make?'

Only those now debating it,
Know what decision they will ultimately make.


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Poetic Form
Metre 0101 1 11 1 0101111 11 1111001 111011010 11011 10110111 111101101 0101111010 1010010011011 11101111 0100110 10110111 11110101101 11011 10111111 11 0 1101 10110101 1100010 01111101 11011101 111111010110 0111101110 101011 11101010 1010011010 1111 01101 1101110111 010101 101111011 101011101 11011 0 111101 1111 11001111 0100101010 01101011 0111111 11111 10110101 110101110001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,404
Words 304
Sentences 41
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 9, 12, 7, 2, 5, 1, 2
Lines Amount 48
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 118
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Written on September 09, 2022

Submitted by lpahtillah on September 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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