Analysis of DON'T BLAME EVE



If not the history that is deliberately deceiving then,
Why is the narrative purposefully misleading.
Who puts in the jurisdiction and
Why does one comply by the commands?
How is it immoral when 'she' oversteps and
By whom was the ceiling drawn ?
When I'm not given tools and water
to set up my own empire,
It feels wrongful to frame me in Parasitism.

I'm obligated to play a leech while
All I envisioned was to be the host.
I was dustheaped to Witchhood for being
'Original'  which was dubbed as 'bizzare'.
My propositions are nothing but vacant ballads and
they are reflected only after supplementary efforts, but,
My brothers were provided invitation to join the summit.

I can sense my voice setting off more towards
south as I stride to be that 'woman'.
I am birthing my own rivals who
Blows candles to crumble the castle that,
I built with my designated ounce of water.
I'm dethroned and my crown stumbled to the floor, but
The half-baked misogynists are unaware of the eternal truth,

For the eternal truth states,
     "Nobody can de-throne the other
      and in her nature is the undying
      Spirit of sovereign.
      The Nativity of the crown will always
      be her Vertex, which shall not be
      reduced to ashes, not by the mortals. "
I carry this eternal truth in my
heart and my womb.


Scheme XABXBXCCD XXACBEE XFXXCEX XCAFXXXDD
Poetic Form
Metre 11010011010000101 1101001000010 11000100 111011001 1110101110 1110101 111101010 11111100 111011101 110011011 1101011101 11111110 010011111 1010110110100 1101010100100101 110001001011010 11111101101 111111110 111011101 1101100101 11111001110 101011101011 0111000101100101 1001011 1111010 0001010010 10110 0010010111 1011111 0111011010 1101010101 1011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,319
Words 255
Sentences 13
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 9, 7, 7, 9
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 251
Words per stanza (avg) 57

About this poem

I tried to pour my original experience with a little bit of exaggeration and metaphors hoping to create the actual representation of how the world works differently for men and women and how we are being the natural reason behind this inconvenience.

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Written on September 07, 2022

Submitted by Femina on September 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:17 min read
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Nandhini Iyappan

My pronouns will be she/her. I try different niches to write my heart out, basically experimenting on my superior niche. I simply like picturing something and writing that out and visualising on how it turns out, provides me immense happiness. more…

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