Analysis of Kuch Adhuri kahani



Kahani jo tujse baat thee Puri kaha krr paya mai
Khushiyon ki teri jholi ko Puri kaha bhar paya mai
Phir kyu tujko jab dekhta hu Man hei man mei ye saochta hu
Mohobbat tho tujse behsumar ki thi Prr na jata krr kabhi  Usse Puri kaha krr paya mai

Tere hasne se din mera bnn jata Tere rone prr mai bhe rota tha
Jab bhe rhti tu sath mere Har pal jannat sa hota tha
Mobhhat naa jata krr apni
 Thodi –Thodi har roz mai tujko khota tha

Teri ankhon ki sabnam ko mai tujse roz hasa krr pita tha
Rha krr sang tere na jane kitna gum mera beta tha
Bhul  na jana meri jaan kabhi
Tere khatir bhe koi jeeta tha  

Aaj aekhhon ke wo mere samne dolli mei baithe ja rhi
Jo dekha krti hassi krr mujhko muh modhe mujhse ja rhi
Aaj laga dil mei usske bhe tha kuch
Jo ankoon mei asu le krr apne mujse nazre thee apni chuppa rhi

Rha gei aduri khani meri jo sath tere bitani thee
Rha gei dil ki jubani meri jo mill krr tujko jatani thee
Aaj koash raha apne ko mai
Mohabbat tho tujhse krr lii thee  maine prr kabhi tho tujse jatani thee

Deer na hoti kabhi mujhse thee phir  isq mei thodi deer krr di
Jindag meri unjale se thee tujshe na paa krr usee andeer krr di
Abb koshu bhe kya apne ko mai
Ani Kismat mei hei apni ulat fer krr di

Aaj hu uski barat mei jisse kabhi sadi sapne dekhe thee
Ankhon mei jisske kabhi sare khwab apne dekhe thee
Wo jaa rhe thee aise jaise jaan ho meri jaa rhi
Yaaro pyar mei humne aeise manjar bhe dekhe thee

Kudha kya khub likhe kismat meri
Isq bhe krra baithe ussei Jo thee bhe nahi kabhi meri
Abb bhe usko jab dekhta hu man hei man mei ye soachta hu
Iss baar nahi tho kya kisi janam mei tho hogi wo meri


Scheme AABA CCXC CCBC BBXB CCAC DDAD CCBC EEBE
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101111 111011101111 1111111111111 111111111111101111 111111111111101 111111111111 11111 11111111 10111111111101 111111111101 1110111 111111 11111111111 11111111111 11111111 1111011111111 1111111111 111111111111 111111 1111111111111 1111111111111 1111111111111 1111111 111111111 11111111111 111111111 11111111111 111111111 111111 11111111111 1111111111111 111111111111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,787
Words 357
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 159
Words per stanza (avg) 42

About this poem

This poem is based on those people who never express his love for there love ones. In the end of time they losses him/her which they truly love.

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Written on September 10, 2022

Submitted by neelamsonkar32 on September 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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