Analysis of Last Relationship



It's becoming evidently visible
Your smiles makes all my pain invisible
It's how your voice sounds
That always gets me spellbound

I can see it all too clearly
Your eyes makes me think peacefully
Although you can't find peace
One day I pray you might find it in me

Your hands keep me in place
I can't seem to slow down the blood in my veins
I can't call you beautiful...gorgeous or pretty
Those are the words that you hears everyday

You do the work of an angel
Keeping me away from sinners
Our connections are stable
Conversations flow like rivers

This is a proclamation...a delegation
You will be mine can't you see the vision
Personally there's no one else for me
Hopefully these words play in your mind on repeat
F* everybody's opinion and let's live in our future
Unknown possibilities for me and you...no for us.


Scheme AAXX BBXB XXBX ACAC DDBXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10101000100 1111110100 11111 11111 11111110 11111100 11111 1111111101 111101 11111101011 11111110 1101111101 11011110 10101110 10010110 0101110 1101010 1111111010 1000111111 100111011101 110001001101010 010100110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 829
Words 164
Sentences 4
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 6
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 130
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

I've been through so many relationships that I was starting to give up. I thought about becoming a player but then I met this girl that has given me hope for a final try

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Written on September 07, 2022

Submitted by talldave801 on September 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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