Analysis of Pre-paid Appearances To Keep



In days of old,
Long ago.
When today those now aging,
Can remember to have been told...
Wishes to want dreams to come true,
All one had to do...
Was to keep the dream.
But also accept to expect,
That dream maybe delayed.
And it withheld.
Until an angel of luck,
Appeared in a rainbow.
With a bucket of gold,
Dropped at the end of it.

And then towards the end,
Of those days of old.
Credit was invented.
To debit those dreams deferred.
Pre-paid.
With a down-payment and a promise made,
Done with one's signature.
As if to sign over,
One's own life and soul.
For possessions to impress.
In exchange for temporary happiness.

Remember the Jones family?
The ones who moved next door?
Getting more to impress.
Leaving others living in the neighborhood,
Feeling depressed and less competitive.
Traveling and adding,
Additions to their homes.
Driving new cars claiming to own.
With children growing up going to college.
On approval loans to get.
Exposing to show and share their dreams.
Yet not their credit cards maxed to debts.

Today?
The Jones family has long moved away.
Leaving no one to know,
If all their dreams have been fully paid.

Only those with outstanding loans.
Doing their best to stretch a dollar.
Hoping to prevent...
Repossession on cars and foreclosure,
On their homes.
Moan and groan,
About appearances to keep.
And wishing never again to see,
The Jones family.


Scheme ABCADDXXEXXBAX XAXXEEFFXGX HXGXXCIJXXXX KKBE XFXFIJXHH
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Etheree  (30%)
Metre 0111 101 1011110 10101111 10111111 11111 11101 11001101 111001 0101 0111011 01001 101011 110111 010101 11111 101010 1101101 11 1011000101 111100 111110 11101 1010101 0011100100 01001100 011111 101101 1010100010 1001010100 100010 010111 10111011 11010110110 1010111 010110111 111101111 01 0110011101 101111 111111101 1011101 101111010 10101 010110010 111 101 01010011 010100111 01100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,377
Words 293
Sentences 35
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 14, 11, 12, 4, 9
Lines Amount 50
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 215
Words per stanza (avg) 48
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Written on November 03, 2022

Submitted by lpahtillah on November 03, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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