Analysis of Belonging To The Stars



Life is my game, I play it
Life is my battle, I fight it
Life is my anecdote
Though I do not happen to write it

Some loose threads spun together
Some stars that jointly aligned
It was the day I was blessed with a life
And cursed with a fate so blind

They tell me I am my creator
I make the path I choose
But to win the privelege to choose
So often I must lose

The quill rests in its hands
My destiny so divine
I am a mere puppet
Struggling to break free and shine

My story spins itself
Printing it on pages that'll be lost
I am simply a protagonist
My demise is the only cost

My advent was its dawn
My end marks the twilight setting along
I have been living a life I never owned
But it is where I eternally belong


Scheme AAXA BCXC BDDD XEXE XXXX XFXF
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 1111111 11110111 11110 111110111 1111010 1111001 1101111101 0110111 111111010 110111 1110111 110111 011011 1100101 110110 10011101 110101 1011101011 111000100 10110101 11111 111011001 11110011101 11111010001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 718
Words 154
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 94
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Written on October 27, 2022

Submitted by 5493 on October 27, 2022

Modified on March 28, 2023

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