Analysis of Loss



Love in my life is like sand
I give it care and attention
I hold it in the palm of my hand
Then a strong gust of wind sifts it through my hands
I lose yet...


Scheme ABACD
Poetic Form Cinquain  (20%)
Metre 1011111 11110010 111001111 10111111111 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 157
Words 36
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 36

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Loving

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Submitted by ktlut75 on October 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Katie Lutshesko

I am single Aussie mum of two boys I Love my boys for who you are, the men you will become and the sons you will always be ❤️ Living in Whangapoaora,Auckland that no matter how dark life gets I am always seeking the light at the end of the tunnel. more…

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