Analysis of Weaponizing A Menace

Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)



Weaponizing the sins of a menace.
Has never won anyone committed,
To witness this menace...
Cross the finish line as champion.
Winning against the competition.
Lacking in luster bluster and bluff.

Weaponizing a menace.
Full of narcissism, ego...
And peacock feathered fluff.
Accustomed to entertain a frauding of pride.
With a doing to achieve,
Adoring fans hypnotized.

To eventually discover,
Their fluffed up feathers plucked.
Personally in a performance public.
Returning regret and reluctant remorse.
To hoards of fans who allowed to follow,
A duck disguised as a peacock.
Deliciously deceiving,
Leaving them treated by a performance.
Although sickened they become,
With lots of time to remember a menace...
They assisted with cheers and applause.
That had directly caused,
Disgust, agony and their own attempts...
To try to deny,
Their supporting to endorse...
The joy and craze of the madness.
Effectively spreading mental illness!
Monopolized to manipulate minds,
Left deluded and severed from using...
Common sense.
Gone to barter or worthlessly pawned away.
For a life to live.
That has become permanently fictioned.
Defended!


Scheme ABACCD AEDXXX XXXFEXGXXAXXXXFAAXGXXXBB
Poetic Form
Metre 1011010 110110010 110110 101011100 10010010 100101001 1010 1110010 01101 0101010111 1010101 010110 101000010 111101 10000001010 01001001001 1111101110 0101101 0100010 1011010010 110101 11111010010 101011001 110101 0110001101 11101 1010101 01011010 0100101010 01010101 1010010110 101 111011101 10111 110110001 010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,137
Words 211
Sentences 27
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 24
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 304
Words per stanza (avg) 58
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Written on November 10, 2022

Submitted by lpahtillah on November 10, 2022

Modified by lpahtillah on November 10, 2022

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