Analysis of Tired Of Being Tired



It's getting close,
From bottom to the top to stop...
Told lies.
Denied.

So close,
It's getting from the bottom to top,
The truth.
As it is.
From where it was.
Duped to reduce.

People have grown tired to be used as fools.
And picked,
As tools to abuse.
People have grown and sick of it.
Being tricked.
By those who are slick.

People are beginning,
To realize...
Their quality of life,
Has become disguised.

People have begun today to open their eyes.
And believe,
What they see.
Without deceivers,
Fiction reality.
People have begun today to open their eyes.
Done more to trust.
What they see.
To be the truth as is.
As real can be.

People are beginning for themselves to know,
Nothing worth is losing,
What they value to let go.
By those,
Who trick.
Then to believe,
They'll get away with it.

Nothing worth to value and kept as known...
Once it has been stolen,
Gone it is to be shown.

Tired of being tired.
Does not return benefits of it.
Being tired.
People have begun to stop and quit.
Being tired.
Of allowing themselves to be tricked.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1101 11010111 11 01 11 110101011 01 111 1111 1101 10111011111 01 11101 10110111 101 11111 101010 110 110011 10101 101010111011 001 111 011 1010 101010111011 1111 111 110111 1111 10101010111 101110 1110111 11 11 1101 110111 1011100111 111110 111111 1011010 110110011 1010 101011101 1010 101001111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,047
Words 244
Sentences 33
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 6, 4, 10, 7, 3, 6
Lines Amount 46
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Written on November 13, 2022

Submitted by lpahtillah on November 13, 2022

Modified on April 06, 2023

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