Analysis of The Stronghold



God is my light and salvation,
So to whom shall I ever fear;
The stronghold of His creation,
That I shall forever revere.

When the wicked and evildoers,
It is they who stumble and fall;
Adversaries are pursuers,
Trying to eat my flesh will crawl.

Though an army camps against me,
I am confident without fear;
Warring factions that I can see,
Are continuing to draw near.

What I desire from the Lord,
That I seek to dwell in His house;
So I can stay in one accord,
And comfortably with my spouse.

In times of trouble, He hides me,
Conceals me from the coming storm;
In the calm He lets me go free,
To continue doing my norm.

And now my head be lifted up,
Above my foes that surround me;
The sacrificed joy fills my cup,
Causing my enemy to flee.

Copyright ©2022 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme ABAB CDCD EBEB FGFG EHEH IEIE X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11110010 11111101 0111010 11101001 10100100 11111001 1001010 10111111 11101011 11100011 10101111 10100111 11010101 11111011 11110101 01000111 01110111 01110101 00111111 10101011 01111101 01111011 0101111 10110011 10101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 790
Words 178
Sentences 7
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

My Light and Salvation Psalm 27:1-6

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Written on November 29, 2022

Submitted by sir_ricky on November 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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