Analysis of Mental Health



We have come to live,
When more seem to be...
Normally conscious,
Of what they say and do to mean.
Without many giving it a second thought,
If what they heard to hear...
Either brought them to laughter.
Or...
Unstoppable serious tears.

We have come to live,
To observe and witness...
What had once been...
A normalcy of consciousness,
These days we live...
Becoming doubtfully debatable.
And not just by a few.
Stopping one another to wonder,
Who are the fools.

And in defense of mental health,
So difficult it has become...
To pass judgement on anyone.
However...
When in times like these to hear and see,
Clearly done to do publicly.
A babbling narcissistic idiot.
Beyond a moron to depict.
This to do only gives fools more respect.
Than one who has notoriety,
Status and questionable wealth.

Yet...
Can not buy sense to make.
Or a consciousness to validate.
Although followed by many who believe,
One who babbles as if crazed.
With a mind,
Light years away from reality.
Is not an idiot but a genius to be praised!


Scheme Abcxxxdxx Acxcaxxdx exxdbbxxxbe xxxxfxbf
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 11111 10010 11110111 01101010101 111111 1011110 1 01001001 11111 101010 1111 01001100 1111 01010100 011101 101010110 1101 00011101 11001101 1110110 10 101111101 10111100 0100010100 0101101 1111011101 11110100 10010001 1 111111 101001100 110110101 111111 101 1101110 1111001010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,020
Words 219
Sentences 26
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 9, 9, 11, 8
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 196
Words per stanza (avg) 45
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Written on December 05, 2022

Submitted by lpahtillah on December 05, 2022

Modified on March 30, 2023

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