Analysis of Idiosingracia



Deja de escudarte,
en el perdón de la religión,
para seguir ofendiendo.

Deja de escudarte,
en la libertad de la democracia,
para seguir agrediendo.

Deja de escudarte,
en que todos cometemos errores,
para seguir cayendo.

Deja de escudarte,
en que te tienen que aceptar como eres,
para seguir repitiendo...

Las faltas y más faltas
que sabes que lastiman a los demás;
las cosas no se olvidan...

Y lo peor es que contestas,
“prefiero vivir solo
para que nadie me diga nada”.

Deja de escudarte,
las excusas nutren el individualismo
y te encarcelan en lo profundo del abismo.


Scheme Aba Axa Aca Aca ccb cxa Add
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 11111111 1011 1011 111111 1011 1011 11111 1011 1011 111111101 1011 111111 11110111 11111 111111 111 10111110 1011 11111 11111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 583
Words 120
Sentences 7
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 64
Words per stanza (avg) 14

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The idiosyncrasy of excuses

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Submitted by idbm on December 23, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ivan David Brieva Maldonado

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