Analysis of You light up another part of me



I wish I could look into another world
Look into your eyes as our thoughts connect those rare moments
You give me hope as my dreams fly me towards the truth with each soft image
I want to hear the beat of your salvation as it whispers to my soul; the skies part and your love reveal it's heart to my hope filled eyes
To float in your hands and share the breath of life we once breathed as one
I look for you in the clouds and reflections of this tireless world
I feel blind as all seeing, you share my sights and all at once I am overwhelmed at how much I miss you
Sometimes I can barely walk on the feathers lining my path from heavens essence
I think of how you walked here before and you light up another part of me.


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Poetic Form
Metre 11111010101 101111101011110 111111111010111110 111101110101110111011011011111111 1101101011111111 11110010010111001 1111110111101111101111111 01111011010101111010 1111111010111010111
Characters 720
Words 147
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 63
Words per line (avg) 16
Letters per stanza (avg) 570
Words per stanza (avg) 146
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Written on January 31, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on January 31, 2023

Modified by heathert.34240 on January 31, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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