Analysis of Face in the clouds



Lift me up to your light sacred father let me see your face once more in the clouds
Separate the mirrors over my eyes that I might glimpse a second of your existence once more
Sit beside me as my thoughts fly on such a severe nightmare without you
Dearest father you have witnessed my thoughts now
You have seen my life torn a sunder and at peace with the heavens
Father in the clouds so familiar my loving family beside you I miss you
You were our face in the croud, the one we looked up to, that everyone knew, now you are a torch burning brightly in heavens corridors
Remember our love father


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Characters 596
Words 116
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 60
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 478
Words per stanza (avg) 115
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Written on February 12, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on February 12, 2023

Modified by heathert.34240 on February 12, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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