Analysis of The nothing of evermore



War is the art of making a withdrawal at the bank
With checks written in the blood of patriots
Spending lives
Without a care or whim
Sacrificing body and soul
Life and limb
To justify a means to an end
The most vicious of my troops I send
To pillage a loot
Your cries of peace are moot
Its truly a tragic scene
For the continued slaughter
Of the fleshy targets
Of everyone’s daughter

I surrender myself
As a modern-day martyr
This is what I do
I destroy them
For you
Point, aim, click
And they explode on cue

Delivered death
Retriever of your continued breath
Until there is nothing left
The charred carcass I heft
To be tossed to the pile
Stacked deep by the mile
Offering a wicked smile
To intimidate
My target of late
The reaper of souls
Would like a date
Not picky
Of your attire
Or where to eat
Just where to hang you by your feet
So you swing to the beat
Of the ratty tat tat
And the boom boom gloom
It’s a buffet of mayhem and doom
Your dance partners
Wear a pin and a spoon

Pull aim and throw
Watch the flesh
Separate and blow
Meat and greet
A disgusting show

Yes its quite fun
Fooling the simple
Almost satisfying
Like popping a pimple
But more fascinating
To watch the meek
Struggle like sheep

Taking orders for death
How would you like it prepared?
Well done, medium or rare?
How about vile and unfair
Without a care
Doing everything I dare
Laying the insanity of humanity
Bare
For all to share
In 1080p
For all to see
Or possibly 4K
To taste the flavor of the day
Bright and vivid
So you can get good and livid
And cry out WHY?
Do so many have to die?

A fair question to be sure
And I do concur
But humanity has it’s lure
It’s a hook
Its a crave
To control others
By filling the grave

Of the willing
To do the killing
Because they were told
By the rich and old
If they win
We fold
Were sold
They will break our mold
And end up cold

It’s truly a rotten game
This thing called war
It should be called
The nothing of evermore
Nothing
Ever
Becomes
More

Eric (and sometimes not)


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Poetic Form
Metre 11011100010101 11100011100 101 010111 1001001 101 11001111 011011111 11001 111111 1100101 1001010 101010 1110 10101 1010110 11111 1011 11 111 010111 0101 010110101 0111101 011011 111101 11101 1000101 1010 11011 01011 1101 110 11010 1111 11111111 111101 101011 00111 10101101 1110 101001 1101 101 1001 101 00101 1111 10010 1100 110010 11100 1101 1011 101011 1111101 1110011 1011001 0101 101011 100010010100 1 1111 01 1111 11001 11010101 1010 11111010 0111 1110111 0110111 01101 10100111 101 101 10110 11001 1010 11010 01101 10101 111 11 01 111101 0111 1100101 1111 1111 010110 10 10 01 1 100011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 2,004
Words 404
Sentences 5
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 14, 7, 21, 5, 7, 17, 7, 9, 8, 1
Lines Amount 96
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 158
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Submitted by EASN on February 12, 2023

Modified on March 23, 2023

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