Analysis of The World Beneath the Heavens



As I look at this world beneath heaven
A remarkable beauty I see.
God's showing us a wonderful portrait.
Of His love that He gave to me

He prepared this world so perfect.
He prepared it for all of our needs.
He prepared us with perfect instructions.
As He shows us how to succeed

Some of His wonderful creations
The moon the sun and the stars
His reasons are so very perfect.
Great light shining down from afar.

I am looking at all of the trees that He made.
Some for food and some for shade
The cattle He gave is for eating.
The water from the ground He made.

The people all around me
made with His great hands.
Searching for an answer
In God's great promised land

Let's all look at this world beneath the heavens.
All the beauty and wonders you see.
You will know our maker means business.
When you do you will feel what will be.


Scheme XAXA BXCX CXBX DDXD AXXX CAXA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 1111110110 001001011 1101010010 11111111 10111101 1011111101 1011101010 11111101 111100010 0101001 110111001 11101101 111011101111 1110111 010111110 01010111 0101011 11111 101110 011101 11111101010 101001011 1111010110 111111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 836
Words 180
Sentences 15
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

This poem first written by me today. I originally wrote this poem in 2019 in a longer version, but I cut it down today giving this poem better purpose.

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Written on March 04, 2023

Submitted by francinek.81254 on March 05, 2023

Modified on April 08, 2023

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