Analysis of spiralling staircase



unopened  letters  litter  the  staircase
no  trace  of  love  or   harmony

the  streets  are  filled  with  race   and   hate
abandoned   cars burn  with  freedom
golden  flames   of  a  future  passed

deceased  bodies  pray  for  forgiveness
 the  living   reside  in   a  heaven  which  is  enshrined  in   hell

black  smoke   lights  up  the   sky
those that  survive
wish  they  had   died

an walking  wounded they  tread  the  back streets

searching  for   sanctuary
pleading  for  forgiveness
seeking  the  truth

beneath  the    red  terracotta  rooftops
peace  hides  behind  the fireplace

an  empty  table
displaced chairs

a young  girl  sacrifices   herself  for   a   packet  of   cigarettes
as  the  young  soldier   entertains   her
she  trains    a   revolver  to  his   head

an  young  innocent  is  put  to  bed
blood  stained  floor   encrusted   in the  dust

no  diamond  shines  on  the  finger
death   lingers in  the  air
the  stench can  never  be  fully   quenched

outside    the  gunfire   chimes
another  women  is  raped

in  this  village  there  is  divide


Scheme AB CXX DX XXE X BDX XA XX XFG GX FXC XX E
Poetic Form
Metre 010101001 11111100 01111101 01011110 10110101 011011010 010010010110101 111101 1101 1111 1101011011 101100 101010 1001 010111 1101010 11010 011 011100011010101 10110010 110010111 111001111 111010001 11011010 110001 011101101 110101 0101011 01101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,100
Words 173
Sentences 1
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 2, 3, 1, 3, 2, 2, 3, 2, 3, 2, 1
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 59
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

emptiness and truth

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Written on March 22, 2023

Submitted by ryraynard on March 22, 2023

Modified on April 26, 2023

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