Analysis of CLOUDED DREAMS
GREY CLOUDED RAINBOW AVENUES
BACK STREET MEWS
EMPTY RETARDED STREETS
TALL DERELICT HOUSES FOR RENT
BROKEN WINDOWS
DAMAGED DOORS
LEAKING ROOFS
UNFINISHED FLOORS
PEELING PAINT
CRUMBLING WALLS
DUST SHEET CORRIDORS
DAMPNESS IN THE BRICK
BLANKETS OF CARDBOARD BOXES
URINE INFESTED BEDS
HALF FILLED BOTTLES OF TEQUILA
COLOURED PILLS TO KILL YOU ALL
UNREAD NEWSPAPERS
FRAGMENTS OF HALF EATED PIZZA
SPILT BOURBON AND ALCOHOL
USED NEEDLES
COUNTLESS SYRINGES
AN DISCONECTED FRIDGE
DIMMED CANDLELIGHT
EACH ROOM IS HOME TO THE LOST AND THE UNCLEAN
NO CURTAINS HANG TO HIDE WHATS INSIDE
NEGLECTED LIVES TRYING THEIR BEST TO SURVIVE
THE GARDEN IS OVERGROWN
PILES OF DISCARDED RUBBISH
THE STALE BREATH OF DEATH
DARK GREEN ALGAE ACOSS THE FORGOTTEN POND
AN FALLEN OAK FULL OF DISEASE
AN NEW RESIDENT ARRIVES
HIS FEATURES ARE FROM OVERSEAS
HOLLOW EYES VOID OF HOPE
HE RESTS HIS HEAD BENEATH A SATURATED MATTRESS
MORE DISTRESSED THAN HE
TOMORROW HIS FAMILY WILL FOLLOW
THEIR LIVES WILL BE BETTER
AS DREAMS ARE DISMANTLED
ALL IS NOT AS IT SEAMS
HIS DAUGHTER IS AT AN AGE YOUNG PRETTY
RIPE TO BE ENGAGED
Scheme | AAXX XBXB XXCX DXEX CEX XDX X X XX XXX XF XFX XGX XXX GX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 110110 111 100101 1101011 1010 101 101 0101 101 1001 11100 10001 101110 100101 11101010 1011111 0110 1011110 110010 110 10010 111 110 11111010001 110111001 01011011101 010101 1101010 01111 1110100101 11011101 1110001 11011101 101111 111101010010 10111 011100110 111110 111010 111111 1101111110 11101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,284 |
Words | 197 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 15 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 3, 3, 1, 1, 2, 3, 2, 3, 3, 3, 2 |
Lines Amount | 42 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 60 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 24 |
About this poem
STARING A NEW LIFE-FOLLOWING A FARAWAY DREAM
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Written on March 24, 2023
Submitted by ryraynard on March 24, 2023
Modified on April 21, 2023
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