Analysis of Blood Sucking



What is it that known blood sucking leeches,
Are defended against...
To protect them from?
With a giving of support to endorse.
It can not be,
Their proven ability to destroy humanity.
Or a ruining the quality of life,
Created to fiction and delude reality and truth.
Just for the purpose to deceive, corrupt...
And pretend what isn't to quicker eliminate,
False beliefs.
In the hope fresh excuses to make,
Are forgiven by those disguising themselves...
As deities picked chosen idols who reflect,
Leadership qualities attracted to cesspool.
Crime and the stench of it to spread,
More profitable decadence.
Its filth.
And the effectiveness this has,
On diseasing to sicken...
Unprepared mentalities too blind.
To fight against the unconsciousness...
For being congratulated for accepting,
A following along down a wrong path...
Warned to have disastrous outcomes for all!

Many have been made these days,
To have their blood sucked.
And their butts volunteered to kick repeatedly.
As if a pledging their allegiance and loyalty,
To thoughtlessness and its benefits.
Promised.
Yet nowhere swirling around,
Down into a cesspool to get.

'Correct me if I'm wrong.'

Okay. About what?

'Shouldn't that cesspool be swirling around,
Clockwise and not in the opposite direction?'


Scheme XXXXAAXXXXXXXXXXXXXBXXXXX XXAAXXCX X X CB
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111010 101001 10111 1010101101 1111 11001001010100 10100010011 0101100011001 1101010101 001110110010 101 001101011 10101101001 110011010101 1010001011 10011111 11000100 11 00010011 11110 01111 11010100 11001001010 0100011011 111010111 1011111 11111 01101110100 1101010100100 1101100 10 111001 1010111 011111 1011 101111001 10100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,271
Words 242
Sentences 26
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 25, 8, 1, 1, 2
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 202
Words per stanza (avg) 40
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Written on April 16, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on April 16, 2023

Modified on April 16, 2023

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