Analysis of Pain



Pain, oh how it burns within,
A raging fire, a punishing sin.
It grips and twists, tearing apart,
Breaking the body and the heart.

No refuge from its cruel embrace,
No respite, no moment of grace.
It lingers on, a constant ache,
A weight that no one can shake.

It steals the joy from every day,
Leaves only tears and words to say,
The agony that won't subside,
The price we pay for being alive.

But even in this darkest night,
There is a glimmer of hope in sight.
For pain can teach us to be strong,
To rise above and carry on.

So let us not be ruled by fear,
But face the pain and persevere.
For in the struggle, we may find,
A peace that heals the heart and mind.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEXX FFXX GGHH
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111101 0101001001 11011001 10010001 110111001 11011011 11010101 0111111 110111001 11010111 01001101 011111001 11001101 110101101 11111111 11010101 11111111 11010001 10010111 01110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 669
Words 155
Sentences 9
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 101
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Written on March 09, 2023

Submitted by Auliq-Ice on April 16, 2023

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