Analysis of I obsess with a foreign voice

ZMosa 1978 (Riyadh)



you seduce my emotions to flow with your rhythm.
as your voice clashes with my heart,  
your vocal chorus  incants a melody on heart's strings

sense my ribs purring driving  inner coy girl to rim of rebellion.
raving your name like a tributary and inebriating
in the melancholic shiver your tone offer,
my resistance heaps to its knees

intrinsic whispers provoke images to glide like clouds,
raining Orchids, while delights flourish on my soul banks
I wonder, could our ears fall in love. Or recognize,
the chosen ones. Providing a portal of fondness?

I obsess with a foreign voice that had descended deep  
Shattering me into mini obsessed streams


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Poetic Form
Metre 1011010111110 11110111 1101010100111 11110101011111010 10111010000100 00010101110 10101111 01010011001111 1010101101111 1101101101110 0101010010110 10110101110101 10010110011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 655
Words 122
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 131
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

exploring the thought of loving without seeing the person, it fascinates me, could that love be stronger or more pure ?

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Written on April 13, 2023

Submitted by ZMosa on April 13, 2023

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ZMosa

44 years old, I stumbled on poetry in 2015, and adored the freedom I have felt, not considering myself a professional yet, more of an emotional poet. My poems a reflection of what I feel . more…

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