Analysis of Who Or The Whom Of It



Who or the whom of it,
Is guaranteed to benefit...
From the chasing after,
Someone else's aspirations.

What serving process is deserving,
Of such loyalty blindly given.
For nothing more,
Than an anticipated deceiving received...
Repeatedly with promises to envision them.
Defended by followers.

Who?
Or the whom of it is guaranteed benefits,
From the chasing after...
Someone else's aspirations.
To later claim,
A permanent addiction created...
By a growing infection.
Directly associated to a manipulating smell.
Known too well,
On both sides of denial.

However...
The blame and accusations alleged,
For this B.S. to continue being what it is?
No one wants to wish to admit,
Being responsible for the fumes permitted.

Although...
Before the wind towards them began to blow,
All endorsed to support and knew...
The creator of the mess.

Yet...
Secretly,
Did not wish to have this acknowledged.
And...
Had been told when bought and sold,
To allow themselves to first...
Inhale then exhale the stench.
With a doing to soon realize how captivating,
And irresistible...
Their delusions kept to fiction can be.

The craze began to normalize the madness.
Giving empathy and credibility as well,
To the many hoping to avoid admitting...
A known but hidden history,
Of a family mental illness condoned.
However...
Only share with authorities,
Who were neighbors, relatives.
And friends of those who still remain foes!

'This represents the presence of nepotism.
With a touch of bitterness, envy and jeaousy!'

Don't forget,
The freedom of entitlements to disrespect...
Whomever we choose.
With a using of free speech to defend,
Bigotry, division, hatred, racism.
And defending our right,
To be as ignorant as possible.
With a demanding stupidity becomes,
Another amendment to the Constitution.

'What is the 'real' issue people display?'

Skin color.
Who is paid more for doing little or less.
Power over others to have.
To compare brain size and intelligence.
And who can be blamed,
For doing something the accusers do done!

'This is sick stuff.'

Ssshhh.
Don't offend the hypocrites.
They are everywhere profiling.
Especially those who dare to find reality...
Witnessed to observe for what it is.
It's best to lie and pretend to be unaware.
Amongst the who and whom opinionated.
One never knows,
The talents and ambitions of deceivers.


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Poetic Form
Metre 110111 1011100 101010 110010 11011010 111001010 1101 11010001001 0100110010101 0101100 1 10111101100 101010 110010 1101 0100010010 1010010 01001001001001 111 1111010 10 01001001 111101010111 11111101 100100101010 1 01010110111 10110101 0010101 1 100 111111010 0 1111101 1010111 0110101 101011101100 00100 1010111011 0101110010 101000010011 101010101010 01110100 10100101001 10 10110100 1010100 011111011 1010101100 10111001001 101 01010100101 01011 1010111101 1000101010 0010101 1111001100 10010010001 01001010010 1101101001 110 11111101011 10101011 1011100100 01111 11010001011 1111 1 101010 111010 0101111110 101011111 11110011101 0101010100 1101 010001011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,334
Words 462
Sentences 56
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 10, 5, 4, 10, 9, 2, 9, 1, 6, 1, 9
Lines Amount 76
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 140
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Written on May 08, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on May 08, 2023

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