Analysis of Back up



Oh lord how i try to drink from this cup. When i do fail you are my backup. You get me on track on where i should be. Not suffering satans tortured agony. Oh lord how i try but i often fail. Pulling me down and making me frail. My backup you are thats what keeps me living and the reason why i keep on giving. Oh lord how i try but sin jumps in the way. Trying to claim me each and every day. My backup you are or i would be lost. Another forgotten soul imagine the cost. Oh lord how i try through you ill get better. Thats why i am writing this sorrowful letter. For all to hear and try to understand. You have a backup in this barren land.


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Words 134
Sentences 15
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
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Letters per line (avg) 493
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Knowing that you have a backup in these days and times.

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Written on May 08, 2023

Submitted by Wbrooks431 on May 08, 2023

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