Analysis of Caged Femininity



I want to touch the sun
But its a long long run

The shackles in my feet
While people find it elite

Restricts me from flying
Since childhood I'm trying

They say I will bloom
But it only brings gloom

I cannot dance, nor can I swirl
Because they say "I'm a girl"

I want to go wild
My heart is still a child

The heart meant to fly
Is turning dry and dry

They put my heart in cage
And no one feels some rage

One day I will fly
But it will be the last try

Then life will loose its meaning
As blur as now its seeming


Scheme AA BB CC DD EE FF GG HH GG CC
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 111101 110111 010011 1101101 011110 11110 11111 111011 11011111 0111101 11111 111101 01111 110101 111101 011111 11111 1111011 1111110 1111110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 518
Words 119
Sentences 1
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 40
Words per stanza (avg) 11

About this poem

This is a poem about how women are restricted from achieving their goals.

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Written on May 11, 2023

Submitted by rabanaakhtar123 on May 11, 2023

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Rabana Akhtar

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