Analysis of Miscarriage Of Ideals



Oh beautiful for spacious skies.
And amber colored waves of grain.
With purple mountains rising,
Over the land of the free and brave...
As voices are heard to sing praises,
To a home all patriots call America.

America.
Going through the pain,
A miscarriage of ideals.
Staining the fabric,
Of a quilt depicting...
To have been created,
From reliable and known to follow...
Steady habits.
None to have seemed these days,
Wanted to wish...
With smiles glistening.
And white teeth expose gleaming bright.

Who laid these seeds to have believed,
Would stay permanently cemented?
Who had it been to deceive,
A place known as home...
Where the Buffalo are free to roam condoned,
Was a picture to paint a perfection it ain't.
Yet...
A miscarriage of ideals.
Appealing to quacks whacked out on crack.
On the wrong track.
Addicts.
Drugged on power.
Grabbing as much of it to get and quick.
With it to fade today; gone tomorrow tactics!

However...
Taking too long,
For an awakened consciousness...
To give a forgiveness expected to heal,
The many embracing...
Ethnic diversity as their cure-all.

Too late to anticipate,
A collective performance of faith...
Returns insight,
To those homemade taught to stay blind.
Too late it is,
For progress anticipated.
And allowed to move forward.
With too many making attempts to prevent,
The natural blooming from birth to grow.
A birth only time given has shown,
Bestows to benefit what God intends.
Without interference,
From those chosen and anointed self serving.
Capable with abilities to manipulate.
As well as achieve,
One unexpected failure after another!
Proving incompetence,
Around long enough to observe and witness...
Can become applauded and welcomed,
As successful as mediocrity represented...
Can get.


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Poetic Form
Metre 11001101 01010111 1101010 100110101 110111110 101110010100 0100 10101 0010101 10010 101010 111010 1010001110 1010 111111 1011 11100 01101101 11111101 111000010 1111101 01111 1010111101 101011001011 1 0010101 010111111 1011 01 1110 1011111101 11110110110 10 1011 11010100 11001001011 010010 1001001111 111010 001001011 011 11111111 1111 110100 0011110 11101001101 0100101111 011011011 0111001101 01010 11100010110 100101001010 11101 10101010010 100100 01101101010 101010010 101010100010 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,748
Words 345
Sentences 39
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 12, 14, 6, 21
Lines Amount 59
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 275
Words per stanza (avg) 57
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Written on May 17, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on May 17, 2023

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