Analysis of Underground Poet



The underground poet, shy and insecure,
Was asked to read in a big gymnasium
But fear hijacked his voice, made him unsure
He agreed to go only if wine helped him
The crowd fell silent; he began to mess
Up phrases, stammering like a drunken fool

Two bottles down, he was a drunken fool
But surprisingly, his words began to secure
The crowd's attention, cleaning up the mess
The audience listened in the vast gymnasium
His drunkenness was no longer a bother to him
He read with a newly found zeal, no longer unsure

The newfound confidence - he was no longer unsure
Made him forget being a drunken mess
The tribute from fans, they rushed to him
Like the quiet appreciation was suddenly secure
His poetry now slaying in every gymnasium
His words touched hearts without any stress

From the wine-stained pages, he caused no fuss
Now a celebrated poet, once a drunken mess
His sold books had put him in a secure state
A life of readings, no longer unsure
He found solace in big gymnasiums
It all started with a couple of bottles of wine, no one to mess

The underground poet, no longer a drunken mess
His wine-induced words had led to applause and fuss
In every gymnasium, shelves now mirrored his secure
Greatness, the once-unsure poet was no longer a bluff
His talents blossomed, no longer needing wine to secure
Every word spoke, accolades and praises followed him

The once-unsure poet, no longer a drunken mess
Now, every gymnasium was his secure place
His talent was no more a bluff, his fame no longer a fuss 


Scheme XABCDE EBDACB BDCBAD FDXBXD DFBXBC DXF
Poetic Form
Metre 0101010100 11110010100 111111101 10111101111 0111010111 110110101 1101110101 101001101101 0101010101 0100100010100 1100111001011 1110101111001 0111001111001 1101100101 010111111 10100010110001 110011001000100 111101101 1011101111 101001010101 11111100011 0111011001 1110010100 11101010110111111 010101100101 110111110101 010001001110101 10010110111001 11010110101101 1001110010101 0101101100101 1100010011011 110111011111001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,513
Words 277
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 3
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 201
Words per stanza (avg) 45
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Written on May 17, 2023

Submitted by JoeStrickland on May 17, 2023

1:23 min read
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Joe Strickland

I'm just a regular, blue collar, working stiff who took an interest in writing poetry many years ago but until recently I haven't had a desire to share any with anyone or pursue publication. I'm an unpublished fork lift operator by night, and a day drinker by choice. I can be followed on Twitter @JoeStricklandSC more…

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