Analysis of Incapable Of It As Is To Receive



When people can not accept,
Respect, sincerity with peace given to receive.
As if this to do,
They are incapable to believe...
Many have achieved this kept to keep,
Cherished to value.
And determined to protect and defend,
What for them has been accomplished.
To feel blessed with this to prioritize.
Folks with faith are wise to pray,
On a daily basis.

Acknowledging to realize,
Nothing else is more important to treasure!?

And...
It should not come to anyone's surprise,
That people who have found a quality of life...
Like this to live.
Are not quick to be disrespected.
Or thought weak to bully or...
Sitting with wishes to be picked,
As if to have won a door prize to be victimized
No!

With a doing to discover,
Misdeeds done to others not to know...
Is not advisable to those,
Beset and visited...
By illnesses felt from head to toe.
And mental instabilities,
Slowly showing to grow.
Incapable of it as is to receive.
With nowhere to go these days but crazed!

Recognizing this,
With opened eyes wide to witness.
Should be proof and evidence enough to stop,
Messing with people just to test...
A reaction one can never guess,
What kind of ammunition they've got.
From where it comes or how and when...
Without it to mention.
Or a response to expect it given.

These are not those times or the days,
To anticipate a return of stupidity.
Just for an attention to get!
These days of our lives to live,
Are mysteriously weaponized.
By 'Spirit Guides'.
And other means of surprising interventions!
These are not the times to pretend,
Insults intended are a result...
Of color blindness.
Then claim an unawareness of it.
Yet obviously directed,
To the ones of ethnic origin!

'I wouldn't be so quick to be so stupid!'

'Excuse me?
You don't know me!'

'Exactly!
However...
Your actions speak louder than words heard!
And your premeditated moves,
Are skilled as if rehearsed to perfection.'

'OH yeah?
And what is that suppose to mean?'

'Like you,
I have no clue.
But I'm willing to bet,
I'll have no regret for a lesson to learn it!'

'Where you coming from?'

'That...
I wish I knew.
But...
I can tell you where I'm going.
To leave you left behind.'

'Done!
Good luck with your endeavors.'

'Thank you for the compliment.'


Scheme ABCBXCDXEXF EG XEXHXXXXI GIXJIXIBX XFXXXXXKK XLMHAXXDXFNJK J LL LGXXK XX CCMN X XCXXX KX X
Poetic Form
Metre 1101101 0101001110101 11111 110100101 101011111 10110 0010101001 11111010 111111010 1111111 101010 0100110 10111010110 0 111111001 110111010011 1111 11111010 1111101 10110111 1111101111100 1 10101010 011110111 11010011 010100 110011111 0100100 101011 01001111101 11111111 1001 11011110 11101000111 10110111 001011101 11101011 11111101 011110 1001101110 11111101 101000110100 11101011 11110111 110001 1101 01011010010 11101101 010101001 11010 111111 11000010 101110100 11011111110 011 1111 010 10 110110111 0101001 1111011010 11 01110111 11 1111 111011 111011010111 11101 1 1111 1 11111110 111101 1 1111010 1110100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,246
Words 488
Sentences 57
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 11, 2, 9, 9, 9, 13, 1, 2, 5, 2, 4, 1, 5, 2, 1
Lines Amount 76
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 113
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Written on May 22, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on May 22, 2023

Modified by lpahtillah on May 23, 2023

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