Analysis of Immature



Immature.
And left mentally limited.
Behind fast advancing,
Forward moving times.

No longer is it sad to see,
A decadent society...
Lost.
Blinded,
By fiction.
And pretense,
Of wholesome purity.

No.
No longer is it sad to see
A corrupted frauding humanity.
Flaunting their criminal activities.
Open and being done publicly.
By high profiled deceiving thieves.
Sitting in positions of authority.

Juvenile, immature and crooked.
Leaving all of us to pay the cost.
Juvenile, immature and crooked.
Few today obey any laws.

No.
No longer is it sad to see.
To believe.
No.
No longer is it sad to see,
A democracy.
Mocked.
And knocked about.
From the bottom to the top nonstop.

Ushered to the curb and dumped.
A democracy.
Mocked.
And ushered to the curb,
In any gutter to dump.
A democracy.
Knocked.
From the top to the bottom nonstop!

By immature,
Childish lieing thieves!

Crooked.
And taught as children this is how to be,
To achieve.
Successfully.
Crooked.
And taught as children this is life to live,
Successfully.
Crooked!

The law of land.
Crooked.
All.
Crooked.
The law of land.
Crooked.
All.
Crooked.
The law of the land!


Scheme abxx Ccxxxxc DCcxcec BxBx DCfDCCGxh xCGxxCgh ae BcfCBxCB IBJBIBJBi
Poetic Form
Metre 01 01100100 011010 10101 11011111 01000100 1 10 110 001 110100 1 11011111 001010100 1011000100 100101100 1110101 10001010100 10001010 101111101 10001010 10101101 1 11011111 101 1 11011111 00100 1 0101 10101011 1010101 00100 1 010101 0101011 00100 1 10110101 101 1011 10 0111011111 101 0100 10 0111011111 0100 10 0111 10 1 10 0111 10 1 10 01101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,131
Words 256
Sentences 48
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 7, 7, 4, 9, 8, 2, 8, 9
Lines Amount 58
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Written on June 01, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on June 01, 2023

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