Analysis of Amber

Thomas A Neddo 1986 (Vermont)



Amber, my love, a radiant flame,
In your presence, my heart became tame.
With grace and beauty, you stole my sight,
A treasure that shines in every light.

Your eyes, like pools of liquid gold,
Reflecting a love that never grows old.
In their depths, I find solace and peace,
A haven where my soul finds release.

Your smile, a curve that lights up my days,
Guiding me through life's intricate maze.
With each gentle curve, my worries subside,
And all of life's burdens seem to hide.

Your touch, a gentle breeze on my skin,
A tender caress that erases all sin.
In your arms, I find warmth and safety,
A refuge that shelters our love gracefully.

Amber, my love, you're my guiding star,
No distance or time could ever mar,
The bond we share, unbreakable, true,
Forever entwined, just me and you.

So let this poem be a testament to,
The love I feel, so deep and so true.
Amber, my wife, my soul's cherished mate,
With you by my side, life is truly great.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH IIJJ JJKK
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 101101001 011011011 110101111 0101101001 11111101 0100111011 011111001 010111101 110111111 101111001 1110111001 011110111 110101111 01001101011 011111010 010110101100 101111101 110111101 011101001 010011101 11110101001 011111011 101111101 1111111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 954
Words 204
Sentences 11
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 121
Words per stanza (avg) 29

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This is for my wife my rock my one true and everlasting love.

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Written on May 30, 2022

Submitted by Tommyneddo2186 on June 01, 2023

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