Analysis of revolving door battle
mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)
I am sitting here once again, my only true friend. I feel like I did before when I said I had enough. I can not take any more of these feelings. I'm closing the door. I'm trying to put that fake smile on my face looking for the ship to sail me out of this place.
This revolving door keeps spinning around, making me so off-balanced that I can not keep my feet steady. I feel like I am going to vomit, but you would like that see what I ate for lunch because you are a nosy son of a bitch, always all up in my shit.
I just one to put a broom handle inside of this revolving door; it is worse than an elevator in a Sears store. Maybe that is why they went bankrupt, but I don't need any goddamn money because I got a soul.
This revolving door of theirs needs to stop spinning around because I got bills that need to be paid and a life that I own that I need to live, but this fucking revolving door is standing in my way laughing as I hear it say you can always check in but never check out we own you now
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Metre | 111011011101111111011111101111110111101100111011111111101011111111 1010111001101111011111111011111101101111111111101110101101111011 11111011001110101111111000011101111110111110110011101 1010111111100101111111110011111111111100101110011101111111110110111111 |
Characters | 1,007 |
Words | 215 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 4 |
Letters per line (avg) | 194 |
Words per line (avg) | 53 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 194 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 53 |
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