Analysis of Deformed
Matthew Flanders 1996 (Louisiana)
This, my half-full glass, my half-formed thought
it was deformed, I should think, and something more
but I could not dare to think it through,
I do not want to see it true.
It frightens me,
my thoughts, the ones I cannot speak. I try to--
no one wants to hear. Even so, I yell to iron bars
clawing around my throat; wrapping around my mouth
the air barely presses through with bursts of noise.
This chest is filled with a muzzled soul, piped up to
a mouth straining under tastes of a metal clamp.
Somewhere between the muffled mutterings comes
a word which rests in an ear for a while.
It floats alone, its friends remain within a mind
which cannot send them out. A voiceless scream,
shrieks, a cry - that is all he hears when honesty
betrays a mind buckling under strains of reflection.
That this muzzle would rust away, and my world
would sputter forth like the Creator’s word.
That is wisdom: the absence of a hindrance.
Scheme | XXAABAXXX AXXXXXBX XXX |
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Poetic Form | Etheree (25%) |
Metre | 111111111 11011110101 111111111 11111111 1101 11011101111 11111101111101 100111100111 01101011111 111110101111 011010110101 1010101001 0111011101 110111010101 1101110101 101111111100 0101101011010 11101101011 1101100101 11100101010 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 931 |
Words | 182 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 9, 8, 3 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 36 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 241 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 57 |
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