Analysis of To you.

Valiantstar 1961 (Sydney)



You show me troubles Lord,
What am I to do?

I don't have the answers,
I don't know the truth.

Thousands upon thousands,
Of souls upon the earth.

Which one's do you value,
Only those within a church?

How am I to touch,
Even a single one.

I can't reveal you're glory,
That is for your son.

So here I sit, with a broken heart.
Not knowing what to do.

Help us Lord,
You're all I have.

I'll leave it up to you.


Scheme AB XX XX BX XC XC XB AX B
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 11111 111010 11101 100110 110101 111110 1010101 11111 100101 1101110 11111 111110101 110111 111 1111 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 413
Words 107
Sentences 10
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 33
Words per stanza (avg) 9

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Written on June 12, 2023

Submitted by myway6119 on June 12, 2023

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