Analysis of A Shadow in the Rain
Tim Seigel 1959 (Iowa)
Born from a light post on a black rainy night,
My lonely shadow trailing, failing to be noticed,
Until in angular movement up a brick building,
it slowly circled around beside me revealing
My head drooping on neckless shoulder;
rising in forward motion.
Now it is tall, as I am tall; a dark, faceless,
A wet reflection of me against the refulgent wall.
I turned my head to the left toward the past,
Revealing my long, curved nose.
A look of dignified wisdom as I foolishly
Stood in the lonely rain wondering who I am
And why.
This weeping apparition hides my eyes and tears
For shadows I will never see again.
Past the light, my shadow proceeds before me growing taller with each soggy, aching step,
Until the dark consumes my empty spirit
Passing in the night.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11011101101 110110101110 0101001010110 1101001011010 11101110 1001010 111111110110 010101101011 11111010101 0101111 011101011100 100101100111 01 11001011101 111110101 101110101110101110101 01010111010 10001 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 772 |
Words | 153 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 13, 5 |
Lines Amount | 18 |
Letters per line (avg) | 34 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 302 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 70 |
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A poem about grief, confusion, sadness, revealed in my shadow.
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