Analysis of The Desire



Humans occasionally claim to love themselves
We say it to mask our sadness of not being wanted.  

The Sensation of being desired
The Desire to be loved

A tiny white lie
Fear of Fire
Afraid to give in
Pretend to be great

Life akin to a candle whom burn itself to provide light to others while you remain in the dark

Broken & Torn apart
Wandering about around trying to disguise your loneliness.
&
Forgetting to remember that life is too short.

Open Heart & Open Eyes

Be wary, scared of loneliness
opening your heart
to the wolf in sheep’s clothing

Only a person who risk is free

Is there Joy beyond your name?


Scheme XX XX XXXX X AB X X BAX X X
Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 627
Words 134
Sentences 4
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 4, 1, 4, 1, 3, 1, 1
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 54
Words per stanza (avg) 13

About this poem

the poem is about the desire of being loved and afraid to give in.

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Written on June 12, 2023

Submitted by Nadjina on June 12, 2023

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Nadjina Camille

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