Analysis of More Reliable Than The Original



As the advancements of artificial intelligence,
Moves forward beyond the limits restricted...
To that process of thinking,
A normal human being seems incapable to do.
Regulations have begun to become placed,
And seriously considered
On artificial intelligence to create.

Not the present to live it as is the future,
Already here yet dismissed.
Like a child given a toy guy.
Growing up to learn using a real one,
Is more satisfying to feel the bang.

Just who in the coming future,
Will have the wisdom to monitor...
Something to have been,
Artificially made to understand, comprehend.
Then with common sense to use it,
And think with reason to do as well.

Good luck!
To all fictioned to delude reality and truth.
Good luck!
To anyone that comes to believe,
They will have the power,
To rule over and control.
Something created,
Not only more intelligent than any human.
But also...
Has the ability to recognize stupidity.
Faster than the bat of an eye of an owl.
Or a squirrel heard requesting,
From a robot appearing to look as if a tree...
Where fresh nuts can be found?
Besides the ones cracked running around.

Since,
Mindless and brain blocked,
Human beings...
Are expecting them, still in these times,
To chase after thrown popcorn.
As if they were pigeons.
Tired of running after stale popcorn,
Even the people throwing it won't eat.

We are living in times,
When a mind expected to use it...
Has long been a wasted opportunity to pass.
Now?
It doesn't matter,
Who is it that argues about...
Teachers being unqualified.
Schools outdated with books no one reads.
And many having the nerve to say...
Today's children,
Which happen to be their children.
Are disrespectful, undisciplined and cuss...
With such filthy mouths.
No one would ever want to be around them.
Except for the drug pushers.
Today's role models.
And imitating them as seen on TV.
VIDEOS.
And high-definition wide screened MOVIES.
Packing up and racking,
All the money up, honey.
Quicker than bees making honey.
It's all the money.
And the ease to make more made,
Without the people!

'Hello?
The light is not on in the attic.
Hello?
Is anyone up there,
With the skills to know...
What is obviously in need of enlightenment.
And in the attic is where this light is meant,
In need the most.'


Scheme xabxxxx cxxdx ccxxex FxFxcxadghxbhii xxxjkxkx jexxcxxxxddxxxxxhxxbhhhxx GxGxgxxx
Poetic Form
Metre 1001010100100 11001010010 111110 01010101010011 0101011011 01000010 10100100101 101011111010 0101101 10110011 1011110011 111001101 11001010 110101100 10111 0100110101 11101111 011101111 11 1111011001 11 11011101 111010 1110001 10010 1101010011010 110 1001001100100 10101111111 10101010 101010111101 111111 010111001 1 10011 1010 101011011 111011 111010 101101011 1001010111 111001 101010111 111010010011 1 11010 11111001 1010010 11011111 010100111 0110 11011110 1010010001 11101 11110111011 0110110 01110 0100111111 100 010101110 101010 1010110 10111010 11010 0011111 01010 01 011110010 01 11011 10111 1110000110100 00010111111 0101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,266
Words 472
Sentences 51
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 7, 5, 6, 15, 8, 25, 8
Lines Amount 74
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 252
Words per stanza (avg) 56
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Written on June 21, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on June 21, 2023

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