Analysis of ROMANTIC SOUL-SHORE



The unspeakable seduction magic is tormented and captured, many times in the prison of a pure feeling in love with two human heartbeats, the sealed and holy vow: how much I love-I would even sacrifice- At a moment, you can be happy here with a sure loyalty here next to me!

With my weak and naive childlike faith, I also lied to myself with my moral conscience that my real and sincere feelings would be pure, and maybe listen to my heart with my heart, but I have betrayed the corals of my inner secrets. I did not blame me in love with anyone else, and cherished his fragile shoulders like a naughty and clownish mooded shoulders rested - dense pearl streams for a moment, my heart with all my sensitive seismograph with selfless confidence and humanity.

I let go of his fragile porcelain personality, and I never lied to him about my real and understanding emotions - though he was persecuted with persistent purposeful and forgiving diligence to take away falsehood and admit a sincere level! It may be my excessive, vertebrate self-consciousness, my human mortal loss first-compass: he called on an sms message with a brilliant armor determination, "Leave me peace for me because I married you!"

In my heart, he wounded the rose petals bleeding as the purple, the altar-love of the beautifying idyll with my light-smoky and romantic Atlantic Soul Coasts! Why I attract how much I want, you mumble there between the blood labyrinths of my incessant brain rollers, and I can't get enough of you because you call the secrets of whispering secrets with the magic power of my soul, and I don't know if I have done it right when I revealed What is the memory of humanly tearful pearls in the heart-kapum with an incessant and stubborn perseverance!

Oh! -Did I spoil what I knew, and maybe inside I felt that you couldn't be mine anyway: I gave you the magic slogan of live conscience as a sacrificial gift, and I didn't regret that as a spike of your disappointment-with a solid will of months-more with me-more with me You didn't talk anymore!


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Characters 2,052
Words 369
Sentences 9
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 326
Words per line (avg) 72
Letters per stanza (avg) 326
Words per stanza (avg) 72
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Written on June 30, 2023

Submitted by oasev on June 29, 2023

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Norbert Tasev

I was born on November 30, 1983 in Budapest! I studied Hungarian history. I was history teacher. I'm editing ebooks! So far, I have published my volumes on Smachwords and Publishdrive as part of an author's book publishing! more…

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