Analysis of lost love

Oakley Mosterd 2005 (queensland)



The most amazing moment was when we met.
The love and time I have shared with you
have all been without regret.

In spite of our love
I am painfully aware
that you are gone
And no longer there.

You made up your mind and you went away
as things started to not feel right.
I know it's pointless to wish for you to stay
because at the end of the tunnel there is no more light.

Often I don't know what to say or do.
So many times I have cried over you.
Emptiness and sorrow are now a part of me
Since I have to accept that we will never be.

Our memories continue to live in my heart
As I wish you well with your brand-new start.

Please, believe me when I say,
You will always be with me,
Come what may.


Scheme ABA XCXC DEDE BBFF GG DFD
Poetic Form Etheree  (40%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 01010101111 010111111 1110101 011101 1110001 1111 01101 1111101101 11101111 11110111111 01101101011111 1011111111 1101111101 100010110111 111101111101 1010001011011 1111111111 1011111 111111 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 707
Words 163
Sentences 10
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 4, 4, 2, 3
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 24

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a poem about someone you love leaves

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Written on December 05, 2023

Submitted by mmost8 on June 05, 2023

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