Analysis of Assets Bloody Sunsets



Daily walks jobs leads us to perks
But too many jerks what really works?
Money lands bloody hands
Stock holding child forms
  clay molding-smart lesson
Whole equation money persuasion
Blood of money home pending

Words need more mending
 Crushing thrush a rush
Cheeks paint like berries
What assets lips met
The sunset monasteries  
How it drips deep heart cherries
 High sweats and debts

Money like chemistry
Bloody like Biology
 Love is needy perfect symmetry
Assets bloody money burning
You surrender to the sunsets
 Blue jets lets hear it for the Vets
Poisonous water feels your cries

Such stomach upsets
Blood stains acid rains
 Explosive bloody pains
Purification- reinvention
  Powerful investment
Feeling those sweats
Religious ceremony- money

Counterfeit and phony
 Left with no assets blood drips
Ship lands thirst for money sips
Mama Mia no sweat sauna
 Words smile and form a stanza  
Assets turn nasty and wet
 Sunsets those are the biggest assets


Scheme AAXXBBC CXDEDDF GGGCFFX FHHBXFG GIIJJEF
Poetic Form Tetractys  (26%)
Metre 10111111 111011101 101101 11011 110110 101010010 1110110 11110 10101 11110 1111 01100 1111110 1101 101100 1010100 111001100 1101010 1010101 11111101 10010111 11001 11101 010101 00100010 100010 1011 01010010 10010 111111 1111101 10101110 1101010 111001 1110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 979
Words 174
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 7, 7, 7
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 157
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

The world is worrisome how people just have everything and I feel the real good ones have nothing. People don't think twice about what they cannot afford. Assets are like smorgasbord. I try to keep my peace. I love looking up at the sunsets but no bloody drips for me

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Written on July 12, 2023

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Robin Carretti

Hello I grew up in the City always loved nature also see the beauty in words. I am caring person married I love yoga to relax at moment. If I can help someone through my writing that means everything to me. more…

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