Analysis of The day I think I met him

Valiantstar 1961 (Sydney)



I approached the intersection
He was sitting there; ragged clothes, ragged hair.

Looking like despair.

I parked ahead and doubled back to talk to this lost soul...

Said he had walked five hundred miles, his feet confirmed his woes.

He had the most lovely face with eyes of piercing blue.

His hands and fingers beautiful his voice meek and mild...

He said his shoes had worn out: "can you help me child?"

I gave him what I had on hand and directions to my pastor, up the way..

Report came back: he was a drunk!
Prayed for him and sent him on his way.

I called a mate and said we had a need...
He grabs some shoes and races up, but no one did he see?

Now many years later I wonder if this could be?

Who was this lonely fellow with the bloody feet and softest eyes?

When I am remembered
I break down and cry.

Angels come as strangers
Blessings in disguise...

I hope one day to see again
Those beautiful blue eyes.


Scheme XA A X X X B B C XC XD D E XX XE XE
Poetic Form
Metre 1010010 11101101101 10101 11010101111111 11111101110111 1101101111101 1101010011101 111111111111 1111111100101110101 01111101 111011111 1101011101 11110101111111 1101101101111 1111010101010101 111010 11101 101110 10001 11111101 110011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 932
Words 209
Sentences 17
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 47
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Written on July 15, 2023

Submitted by myway6119 on July 14, 2023

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