Analysis of Potpourri in the Desert



My desert is a barren space
With sand quite hot and dry.
It often is a lonely place
Where clouds so rarely cry.

It has a small oasis where
A potpourri is found
With plants that thrive with daily care
And water underground.

I try to stay there when I can,
But getting there is hard,
And staying there means I must scan
All things to be on guard.


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF
Poetic Form Traditional rhyme
Quatrain 
Metre 11010101 111101 11010101 111101 11010101 00111 11111101 01010 11111111 110111 01011111 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 346
Words 76
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

A small amount of faith does help.

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Written on July 18, 2023

Submitted by stevec.24118 on July 18, 2023

Modified by stevec.24118 on July 19, 2023

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